英语作文请求点评

英语作文请求点评
My English learning
I starded to learn English in Grade 6.I usually learn English by reciting and writing articles .I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.Besides,I often watch English movies.And now I begin to listen to English radio programs.They are helpful.Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
我是一个高中生,盼望能有高手帮我修改一下我的英语作文,