At the ages of 16,I first visited Canada with my parents in the summer for 1985.
问题描述：
At the ages of 16,I first visited Canada with my parents in the summer for 1985.
答
供参考
(1)
age
交代年纪一般有3个方法
at age 16
at the age of 16
aged 16
所以最少的改动会是
At the age of 16﹐...
(2)
某年的某个季节
表达方式会用 of 这个介词
所以
the summer for 1985
宜改为
...the summer of 1985.