（高分）短文Is it good for people to go shopping on the Internet?有吗?

Talking about is it really good to have online shopping, let's discuss it through a real situation.
One day, you received an invitation card which said that there was a big party held in a 5-star hotel. It was a surprise and made you very excited. But after that, you should pay attention to choosing an appropriate dress for it. There weren’t any right ones in your closet. But the day was approaching. You wanted to be the star in the party and shined from the beginning to the end. So you decided to go out for shopping some dress or jewels. Just 3 days left. You really had no enough time for it.
Have a try to do an online shopping. There are millions of goods you can choose. The prices of goods are more reasonable and cheaper than in the retail stores. Facing with the beautiful dress, bags, jewels, and make-ups, we can’t help being fussy and picky. Girls can definitely spend 24-hour on surfing on the web just for only one dress or something without feeling any tired. Who doesn’t care about the money? We only have a small amount of money. Although we don’t need to bargain with the seller for a dress, and it is forbidden to bargain, the price of goods on the web should be checked and compared by us with the other 2 or 3 online stores. Maybe for several times. If you haven’t got any good ideas about that how to match them appropriately. Don’t worry about that. A lot of advertisements of famous goods can teach you that. You can search what you want by Baidu or Google. After a long online-shopping distance, you choose a black ceremonial dress which costs 200 yuan. How to pay for it? When can I get it after sending a submit? You can communicate with the seller about the 2 questions by MSN or QQ. Any questions about the goods can be asked. For example, some goods descriptions that are not mentioned clearly and special requirements about delivery. It is quite convenient for consumers. A payment tool called Zhi Fu Bao was the most popular in all. It is much safer than any other ways of payment. You never worry about that the money will be charged in advance although the goods are not delivered to your address as the time you expect. And if the goods you bought is not the same as the one that is described online. You have rights to return the purchase and not to pay any. Everything is at your service. Congratulations! You got what you really want to have.
Hold a second! If there is something bad happened with the dress after a few days. What should you do? Call to the store online for changing a better one? Unfortunately, you haven’t the receipt or invoice. Actually, the seller doesn’t give you any purchase receipts. It is the rule. Like dress, it can’t be put on for a try, so we need to communicate with the seller first online about it. There are fake goods sold online. We must sharpen our vigilance.
On the whole, the advantages of shopping online are bigger than disadvantages. Nowadays, it is a high-tech times. You can do something without waiting too long, because you have a computer. Finding a route, searching for information, sending a CV for a job application, shopping online and so on. Besides, you can do whatever you like to do. Web is an amazing tool that can help us to do anything. Of course, there is no impossibility. Computer and internet are the ones which people haven’t imagined to have in the past but contribute to us much more or the best things now and in the future.

对人们来说去网上购物好吗？不太通顺，大概这意思吧。

网上购物好不好?