作文第一句用this is my everyday life

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作文第一句用this is my everyday life

不好

最好用this is my daily life
你这个everyday life 太中式了
还有你开头用这句似乎不好,首先这个是this开头的句子领导全文未免太“嫩”了点.
你可以这样说,Everyone has different daily life,including me,I have my own special daily life.