[11/18] |correct the mistakes in the composition|请挑出这些句子的语法错误/注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/并改正/.[1]I found a new life's pleasure today.[2]Writing light novel make me very excited.[3]Though my literary style isn't so graceful.[4]I think writing can change my living state that is now short of imagination.[5]Writing has its own charm that I have never found before.[6]I once thought only painting would be my life.[7]I don't look forward

[11/18] |correct the mistakes in the composition|
请挑出这些句子的语法错误/
注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/
还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/
并改正/
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[1]I found a new life's pleasure today.
[2]Writing light novel make me very excited.
[3]Though my literary style isn't so graceful.
[4]I think writing can change my living state that is now short of imagination.
[5]Writing has its own charm that I have never found before.
[6]I once thought only painting would be my life.
[7]I don't look forward to writing such a profound story,but just want to make every reader take easy.
[8]It's a love story.
[9]I think love shouldn't be a heavy thing.
[10]I want it to be warm,but not hot.
[11]So I wrote the story into a light comedy.
[12]Thus I never thought much of soap-dramas.
[13]I only wrote a few leading roles in my play.
[14]The story is about a girl in ancient china who skip the time and fall in present-day.
[15]Some piffle in the story made me ashamed,I couldn't believe such the silly sentences were wrote by me,but I love them.
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英语太烂,现在坚持每天写作文,请各位大大帮忙改改错|||前几天的在这里: