英语翻译我在上周递交了贵国商务访问签证的的申请,但由于申请商务加急通道的条件刚刚过期而不得不申请了普通商务申请.我们这次打算在9月初访问贵国及其他两个国家,所以在申请了贵国的签证之后我们还将申请其他两个国家的签证.因为时间有限,将与我同行的其他同事都申请了商务加急通道,再此我十分真诚的请求贵国领馆工作人员能尽快处理本人的签证申请,最小程度的影响其他同事的正常出行,附上本人相关信息：同事相关信息：

I submitted an application for the business-visiting visa to your country last week,（有的国家可以直接说XX国的，看楼主自己决定吧）but as a result of the condition for the urgent-business channel just expire,I had to submit my ordinary-business application.This time we are going to visit your country and 2 other countries in the early September,so we will have to apply for the visa to the countries.Beacuse of the limited time,and my colleagues who will go with me having applied for the urgent-business channel,I have to sincerely request your consulate staff to deal with my visa application as soon as possible,to not influnce the others' schedule.
I have to say thanks from the bottom of my heart!
Enclosed here with my information:
my colleagues' information:
(PS:个人建议最后一句可以改成这样，你的原文翻译成英文就没了中文的那种诚恳的味道了有点像是在强求别人做这个事一样，我觉得这样改了好点，只是我个人建议吧~~)
My colleagues who will go with me having applied for the urgent-business channel.If the consulate colleagues could deal with my visa application as soon as possible,it will help my colleagues and me very much,I have to say thanks from the bottom of my heart!
将与我同行的其他同事都申请了商务加急通道，如果贵国领馆工作人员能尽快处理本人的签证申请，这将大大帮助我与我的同事，本人十分感谢！

我在上周递交了贵国商务访问签证的的申请，但由于申请商务加急通道的条件刚刚过期而不得不申请了普通商务申请。我们这次打算在9月初访问贵国及其他两个国家，所以在申请了贵国的签证之后我们还将申请其他两个国家的签证。
I had submitted an application for a business visa to your country last week, I was compelled to do it through common application because the condition for applying through urgent channel had just been overdue. We plan to visit your country and two other countries at the beginning of September, so we will have to apply for the other two visas after being granted visas by your country.
因为时间有限，将与我同行的其他同事都申请了商务加急通道，再此我十分真诚的请求贵国领馆工作人员能尽快处理本人的签证申请，最小程度的影响其他同事的正常出行，十分感谢！
In view of the limited time available, my colleagues who are making the trip with me had applied their business visas through the urgent channel. In order to be in line with them, I sincerely hope that your consulate officers can process my application as soon as possible, so that my colleagues’ travel plan is affected by me in the least possible way.

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I submitted your business visit visa application last week, but due to the condition of commercial expedited channels have just expired and had to apply for a general business applications.We going to visit your country in early September and the other two countries, so after you have applied for a visa in your country and we will also apply for visa in the other two countries.Because of the limited time, will work with my other colleagues have applied for business express channel, and this I am very sincere request your country Consulate staff to process my visa application as soon as possible, minimum impact normal travel of other colleagues, I am very grateful!Herewith I related information:Colleague-related information:
是我单点翻译的，希望对你有用！！

Last week I submitted your business visit visa application, but because of the application of business express channel conditions just expired and have to apply for a common business applications.We plan to visit your country in early 9 and the other two countries, so for your visa we will also apply to the other two countries visa.Because of the limited time, will with my fellow colleagues have applied business express channel, and this I sincerely request your consulate staff can be treated as soon as possible my visa application, minimum extent other colleagues to normal travel, thank you very much!

Last week,I submitted a business visit visa for your country the application,but due to apply for a business expedited channel conditions just expired and had to apply for general business applications.This time we intend to visit your country and the other two countries in early September,so apply for your visa,we will apply for the visa of the other two countries.Because time is limited,and other colleagues of my peers,business expedited channel were applied,again I am very sincere request of the staff of the Consulate of your country as soon as possible to deal with my visa application,the minimum extent of the normal travel of other colleagues,I'm very grateful!
有的地方可能出错,