英语 小小作文 帮我看看There are lots of things you could do.First,you should talk with her about why she do it.Next,I think you should buy two math books.If you don't have money.I'm borrow money from you.One of a piece of advice.I think that you must keep away from him.帮我检查以下有什么语法错误 请指出!

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英语 小小作文 帮我看看
There are lots of things you could do.First,you should talk with her about why she do it.Next,I think you should buy two math books.If you don't have money.I'm borrow money from you.One of a piece of advice.I think that you must keep away from him.
帮我检查以下有什么语法错误 请指出!

why she do it 不对,可以说why she did so
I'm borrow money from you. 是我可以向你借钱,你把钱借给我,再说也不能说 i am borrow呀,be是不可以加动原的.要表达把东西借给别人应该说lend to
i'll lend some money to you.
one of a piece of advice不对
one of 应该加名词复数啊

You can do lots of things.At first, you can talk to her about why she did it. After that, you can buy a maths book for her. If you don't have enough money, I can borrow you. There's another adcive that you have to keep away from him.

There are lots of things you could do.First,you should ask her why she did that.Next,I think you need two more math books.If you don't have enough money,just let me know.Listen,please stay away from h...