初三英语作文the development of shanghai求

Shanghai is a beautiful place.Huangpu River divides the city into Pudong and Puxi,there is a marvelous collection of architectural styles in Puxi,and a lot of modernistic buildings in Pudong.Developed communications link Pudong and Puxi and whole city closely.In the famous and historical city,ancient and modern,artistic and natural are matched so perfect.You can enjoy blue sky and white clouds,green grass and clear water,singing birds and fragrant flowers everywhere...people live in peace and enjoy their work,always keep the city full of vitality.I am so pround of Shanghai.
The World's Exposition 2010 will be held in Shanghai.It's an opportunity for showing Shanghai,we must grasp it and return the pleasant surprise to the world.We will get together with the people from the world in understanding,communictaion and co-operation then.Welcome to Shanghai.
As a pupil,I will do the best to study well,upgrade myself,create a good image,stand by at anytime to be a host to the friends all ove the world.
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