请帮我看看这句话有错吗my idol is Michael Jordan and I dream one day I could play basketball as good as him.
问题描述：
请帮我看看这句话有错吗
my idol is Michael Jordan and I dream one day I could play basketball as good as him.
答
My idol is Michael Jordan and i drean of playing basketball as good as him one day.
答
as good as him 改成as well as him
修饰动词要用副词
答
梦想,应该使用dream of doing sth.改为
my idol is MJ. My dream is that I could play basketball as good as him in one day.
或者
My idow is MJ and I dream of playing basketall as good as him in one day.