一道英语改错题,一共有十个错误.During the national day holiday,I went to xi’an,where is really a very beautiful city.on October lst,my parents and I got there by the air.Actually,I was very excicing,because it was my first visit in xi’an.My uncle came to meet us at the airport.How happily was when I saw him,as I haven’t met his for many years.On October 2nd ,they went to the bell tower,luckily,I struck the old bell or enjoyed a good performance.Then we enjoyed a won
一道英语改错题,一共有十个错误.
During the national day holiday,I went to xi’an,where is really a very beautiful city.on October lst,my parents and I got there by the air.Actually,I was very excicing,because it was my first visit in xi’an.My uncle came to meet us at the airport.How happily was when I saw him,as I haven’t met his for many years.
On October 2nd ,they went to the bell tower,luckily,I struck the old bell or enjoyed a good performance.Then we enjoyed a wonderful dinner.
On October 3rd,we paid visit to the zoo where I made friends with monkeys.
In short,I feel very happy while visiting Xi’an city.
一共有十个错误.
1 national day -> National Day
2 where-> which
3 by the air-> by air
4 exciting-> excited
5 How happily was -> How happy I was
6 met his-> met him
7 they went-> we went
8 or enjoyed -> and enjoyed
9 paid visit -> paid a visit
10 I feel -> I felt
where->which
by air,去掉the
exciting->excited
happily->happy
haven't->hadn't
his->him
they->we
or->and
a visit,visit前加a
feel->felt