英语改错 请帮我指出下列句子错误的地方!We will carry out a safety training on April 4(this Friday) for preventing the accident due to unprofessional operation during the manufacture process.
问题描述：
英语改错 请帮我指出下列句子错误的地方!
We will carry out a safety training on April 4(this Friday) for preventing the accident due to unprofessional operation during the manufacture process.
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建议改成：We will carry out a safety training on April 4(this Friday) for the prevention of accidents due to unprofessional practices during the manufacturing process.
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We will carry out a safety training on April 4th(this Friday) to prevent accidents due to unprofessional operations duting manufacutre processes.