请帮我英语批改作文Everyone has hobby .Everyon~s hobby doesn~t different.I have a hobby ,too .my hobby is collecting old coins.i think collect old coins it is very interesting.i have been collecting old coins three and a half years.now i have 200 of them .collecting old coins make me very happy .i would like to start an old coins~club.

Everyone has hobbies .Everyone~s hobbies aren't different. I have a hobby . My hobby is collecting old coins. I think collecting old coins is very interesting. I have been collecting old coins for three and a half years. Now I have 200 of them . Collecting old coins makes me very happy . I would like to set up a collecting old coins club.

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Everyone has hobbies and hobbies are different for everyone.I do have one hobby,too,which is colllecting old coins.I think it is interesting to collect the old coins and I have been doing this for thr...