请帮我看看这句话是否存在错误(英语)A handsom man join the surfing match who in bikini and he win..

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请帮我看看这句话是否存在错误(英语)
A handsom man join the surfing match who in bikini and he win..

join一般指参加组织可以换成take part in

错误多了
应该是A handsom man who in bikini joins the surfing match and.