这段话的语法错误.HI Lucy!Your mum has told me about you and your twin sister Hannah.I think that int's a good thing to have a sister who is the same age as you.You can share the feelings of sadness,happiness or even fear.I used to study in a Chinese public school.Be honest,I didn't like my school.I dislike the educational style of Chinese schools.students get too much pressure.Luckily,I changed my school to Harrow.Harrow is a British school.I feel better bein
这段话的语法错误.
HI Lucy!
Your mum has told me about you and your twin sister Hannah.I think that int's a good thing to have a sister who is the same age as you.You can share the feelings of sadness,happiness or even fear.
I used to study in a Chinese public school.Be honest,I didn't like my school.I dislike the educational style of Chinese schools.students get too much pressure.Luckily,I changed my school to Harrow.Harrow is a British school.I feel better being with foreign teachers although Harrow isn't as good as I expected.
Are you at work now?What's your job?Did you like your school?
Bye
Victoria
没什么问题，就是拼写错误，第一行的int's
HI Lucy!(改为，）
..mum has told...(has 去掉）
think 改成thought
。。int's。。(改为it is)
...or even fear(改为 and fear even.)
be honest 改成in honest
my school 改为 the school
dislike改disliked
问题太多了，没法逐一分析，太浪费时间了
int's改为is or even fear改为and evenBe honest改为to be honest I didn't like my school.改为I don't like my school. students get too much pressure.中students 首字母大写Did you like your school?改为Do yo...
sister改sisters