看一下这篇文章有没有语法上的错误I have a dream that I can be an astronaut.Although our earth is very big,but there are sixty-five hundred millions people in the world.One day the resource will use up.It’s terrible!I want to be an astronaut because I want to find a new star for people to start their new life.In spite of having difficulties,I still believe my dream will come true.For example,I must have strong and healthy body and analytical ability.Maybe you will say

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看一下这篇文章有没有语法上的错误
I have a dream that I can be an astronaut.
Although our earth is very big,but there are sixty-five hundred millions people in the world.One day the resource will use up.It’s terrible!I want to be an astronaut because I want to find a new star for people to start their new life.In spite of having difficulties,I still believe my dream will come true.For example,I must have strong and healthy body and analytical ability.Maybe you will say I am a girl,but I will work hard for my dream.

one day the resource will be used up. to start their new lives..
整体还是有中文的感觉

I have a dream that (one day) I can be an astronaut.
Although our earth is very big(large),but there are sixty-five hundred millions people in the world.One day the resource will (be used up).It’s terrible!I want to be an astronaut because I want to find a new star for people to start their new life.In spite of having difficulties,I still believe my dream will come true.For example,I must have (a)strong and healthy body and analytical ability.(Despite) I am a girl,but I will work hard for my dream.