请教英语句子改写,病句修改.The bridge had been weakened by successive storms,It was no longer safe.改写成简单句(simple sentence)病句12.I am very tired this evening,it was a long day at the office.13.I have followed the instruction faithfully given by the manual.14.To take this course,the professor must give her approval.In summer,Juanna didn’t love traveling in Rome she felt it was too hot there.Juanna doesn’t love to travel in Rome in summer,because she felt it was too h

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请教英语句子改写,病句修改.
The bridge had been weakened by successive storms,It was no longer safe.改写成简单句(simple sentence)
病句
12.I am very tired this evening,it was a long day at the office.
13.I have followed the instruction faithfully given by the manual.
14.To take this course,the professor must give her approval.
In summer,Juanna didn’t love traveling in Rome she felt it was too hot there.
Juanna doesn’t love to travel in Rome in summer,because she felt it was too hot there.

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In summer, Juanna didn’t love traveling in Rome because she felt it was too hot there.

The bridge was no longer safe due to successive storms.
12. It was the long day at the office that made me very tired this evening.
13. I have followed the instructions faithfully as stated in the manual.
14. The professor must give her approval before I can take this course.
Joanna didn't like to travel around in Rome because she thought it was too hot over there in the summer.
Joanna doesn't like to travel around in Rome because she thinks it is too hot over there in the summer.

The bridge was no longer safe because it has been weakened by successive storms.
12. I am very tired this evening, because I spent a long day at the office.
13. I have followed the manual instruction faithfully.
14. In order to take this course, she must get the professor's approval.
Juanna didn’t love traveling in Rome in summer, because she felt it was too hot there.
Juanna doesn’t love to travel in Rome in summer, because she feels it is too hot there.
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The bridge weakened by successive storms was no longer safe.12.I am very tired this evening,since it has been a long day at the office.13.I have followed the manual instruction faithfully.14.To take t...