帮忙看看两个英语句子有错吗?1.Despite the fact that success can not be easily attained,many people try to figure out the way to attain their own, resulting in two opposite opinions of succeeding. resulting in 前面是不是少什么东西?2.whoever want to succeed needs to make plans in detail to make sure everything is on track. 能去掉is吗?谢!

1.前面不少东西，因为句子本身已经完整，这里最后的这部分作补充，说明导致的后果。
2.不能去，因make sure 后面 这部分是一个宾语从句

is不能省，其他的没问题

两个句子都没什么问题。第一个，resulting in 跟后面的部分一起构成结果状语，第二个make sure（that）引导了一个宾语从句，从句的谓语is不能省略。

1，如果是动名词引导的从句的话是不缺东西的
2，is不可去 作为该从句的谓语

1.Despite the fact that success can not be easily attained,many people try to figure out the way to attain their own,resulting in two opposite opinions of succeeding.resulting in 前面是不是少什么东西?
不少,resulting及其后面的成分做前半句的结果状语,此时resulting的逻辑主语就是前半句这件事,整个结构相当于...,which results in two.
2.whoever want to succeed needs to make plans in detail to make sure everything is on track.能去掉is吗?谢!
make sure (that) everything is on track
这是个that引导的宾语从句,that本身省略了；is是从句谓语动词,不能省.

1.尽管事实是不会轻易获得成功,很多人试著找出方式获得自身的,导致两个相反的观点succeeding.导致的 这个错了： succeeding.
2.谁想要成功需要详细计划,以确保一切步入正轨。
第二句没问题~！