请语法高手修改2句话语法错误.急 seven years have passed,I still remember today of every year.Wish all Chinese the third senior high students who are extremely hard work more than ten years,could get over the college entrance examination!It's could be the turning point of life.7年过去了，每年这个时候我还记忆犹新。预祝所有寒窗苦读十年书的中国人能顺利通过高考。这是人生的转折点。端午节快乐 (或者请简洁翻译这句中文，

have been passed
point to

1.who（ are） extremely hard work ... 把are 去掉
2.college entrance examination（s）漏了S！

有中文吗？不明白你是啥意思。特别是第一句。

It's could be the turning point of life ->It should be the turning point of life .
I still remember today of every year ->I still remember today every year
Wish all Chinese the third senior high students who are extremely hard work more than ten years,
->Wish all the Chinese high school students

修改如下Seven years has passed,I still remember today every year.Wish all the Chinese senior high students in grade 3 get over the College Entrance Examination,for their more than ten years extreme ha...

have passed ，直接用passed是不是就行。it's cuold be,it could be.