错误英语短文.帮修改my friend is Kate.she is 12.her school is beijng school.she is in Class 1 ,Grade2.she class teacher is miss white .she favourite sport is playing .she favourite 0subjects is english and art.she want to be a scientist

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错误英语短文.帮修改
my friend is Kate.she is 12.her school is beijng school.she is in Class 1 ,Grade2.she class teacher is miss white .she favourite sport is playing .she favourite 0subjects is english and art.she want to be a scientist

slj3789朋友的修改基本准确,只是第三句中study的第三人称应为studies.
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修改后的文章如下:
My friend is Kate. She is 12. She studys in Beijng school.She is in Class 1 ,Grade2. Her class teacher is Miss White .Her favourite sport is playing basketball(或其它球) . Her favourite subjects are English and Art. She wants to be a scientist.

Her class teacher is Miss White
Her favourite sport is playing+球类
Her favourite subjects is English and Art

she wants to be a scientist.