英语的自我介绍,随性一点的,不要很正式的那种,简短点（高中用）

1.Teachers, students, good morning, my name is xxx, I am 17 years old. I come from xx, a child, I was the only child at home, we all hurt me, so now I am a little bad temper, a little headstrong, I hope you forgive me, the holidays, I like to stay home and watch novels, songs, Internet ... ... I do not like sports, I like Japan and South Korea, because there are many of my favorite stars, such as TVSQ, ss501, wind ... ... My dream is admitted to Shanghai's Fudan University, hope to work together with you to achieve your dreams
2.hello everyone , it is my great honour to be here to introduce myself , my name is ** , I'mgraduate from ** ,I a an out-going girl , when Iwasin my seinor school , thecourse is underpressure .It made me hard to breath. but I beliece in myself that Icould get used to itvery fast .Ilike music a lot ,every saturday , I will listen to my favourite musicso that I can relax myself , how is your way to relax yourself , can you tell me , I hope that we can be friends , thank you!