英语短文改错 一共十处I'm a fifteen-year-old boy,but I'm different to the other boys of my ages—I'm blind.Last month,I travel by train to visit my grandma.At one station,the train stopped and a young girl got on and sat beside me.Then I asked her if it was beautifully outside.She replied.''Why not looking out yourself?''I guessed he didn't notice I was blind.I didn't want her to notice that,but I turned away and stopped talking with her.Half hour later,the train

I'm a fifteen-year-old boy,but I'm different to（with） the other boys of my ages(age)—I'm blind.Last month,I travel(ed) by train to visit my grandma.At one station,the train stopped and a young girl got on and sat(set) beside me.Then I asked her if it was beautifully outside.She replied.''Why not looking out(by) yourself?''I guessed he(she) didn't notice (+that)I was blind.I didn't want her to notice that,but(so) I turned away and stopped talking with her.Half hour later(ago),the train stopped and she got off.Then a woman came to me and told about(删去) me,''I don't think you know it,but the girl is blind,either.''
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1different to 把to改为from 2age
3travelled 4beautiful
5look out 6 he 改为she
7but 改为 so 8Half an hour
9about去掉 10either改为too。

1 different to(from)
2 I travel(traveled)
3 it was beautifully(beautiful)
4 looking out (look out)
5 i guessed he(her)
6 notice i was blind(notice that i was blind)
7 but i turned(so i turned)
8 half hour(half an hour)
9 told about me (told me)
10 either(too)

year--years