英语句子校对

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英语句子校对
It is with great pleasure that I invite you to attend the conference,which will be held on April,on
behalf of our college.想表达以学院的名义邀请,用上限制性定从。如何改得更地道?

It is with great pleasure that to invite you on behalf of our college to attend the conference which will be held on April.
既然是以学院的名义邀请就不要用“I”了.