Please revise the mail.Many happy could receive your email.We just finished outward trainning from Thursday to Saturday once a year.I was also sad what you said.We couldn't change anything in the cruel situation.If you need something help,please tell me.以上有需要修改的句子吗?

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Please revise the mail.
Many happy could receive your email.We just finished outward trainning from Thursday to Saturday once a year.
I was also sad what you said.We couldn't change anything in the cruel situation.
If you need something help,please tell me.
以上有需要修改的句子吗?

改改明显的语法吧:Happy to receive your email.We just finished outward trainning from Thursday to Saturday once a year.I was also sad for what you said.We couldn't change anything in the cruel situati...