请高手帮我改个短文（有语法等错误的）,顺便告诉为什么?I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail from 1___you.I'm glad you have made such a great progress 2___that you can write your e-mail good Chinese.I read 3___your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you 4___sent it to me.How time flies!Our friendship has lasted 5___for several months.We have got to know but learned a 6___lot from each other.Yes,it is clearly that you life in 7___your country is quite different f

1.accepted->received
2.a 去掉
3.e-mail 和 good 之间加 in
4.show->showed
5.去掉 it
6.but->and
7.you->your
8.me->mine
9.hear->hearing
10.对的

I am very excited to have accepted an （应该是the, 因为说得是你发来的邮件，而不是任何一封邮件） e-mail from 1___
you.I'm glad you have made such a （a 不需要）great progress 2___
that you can write your e-mail （加上with）good Chinese.I read 3___
your e-mail to my parents and show (加上ed，因为给他们看过了，要用过去式) them the photo you 4___
sent it （it不需要）to me.How time flies (拼写错误，应该是flys, 如果写成flies,就是苍蝇的意思)!Our friendship has lasted 5___
for several months.We have got to know but （and, 这句话的意思是了解并学习，而不是了解但学习） learned a 6___
lot from each other.Yes,it is clearly that you （加上r，因为是你的生活，而不是你生活）life in 7___
your country is quite different from me （mine, 不是你的生活和我不同，而是和我的生活不同）.Thanks again 8___
for writing to me.I'm looking forward to hear from 9___
you soon.Best wishes to you and your family. 10___
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自己改的~希望有帮助~

【答案】
1.accepted→received【表示一般的“收到”,而前者表示心理上愿意“接受”】
2.去掉a【progress不可数】
3.in good Chinese 【用什么语言写】
4.show → showed 【过去式.上面read过去式同形.】
5.删除it.【You sent to me做the photo的后置定语】
6.but→and
7.you→your
8.me→mine 【对应上一行your life:我的(生活)】
9.hear→hearing 【look forward to 后跟名词或动名词】
10.无误