这句英语对吗With the tremendous success of the opening ceremony of the Beijing Olympic Games,With the tremendous success of the opening ceremony of the Beijing Olympic Games,he has consolidated his position as the country's leading director.我写的这句话语法对吗
问题描述：
这句英语对吗With the tremendous success of the opening ceremony of the Beijing Olympic Games,
With the tremendous success of the opening ceremony of the Beijing Olympic Games,he has consolidated his position as the country's leading director.
我写的这句话语法对吗
答
同意LS，但那个leading好像不要也可以
答
去掉最开始的With
把has改成was比较好，然后去掉his position
答
楼上乱指挥.这句话很完美了.不用改.