英语作文改错,Dear Joe Fread:How are you?Thank you to me.I know a lot of you and I tell you something about me.Iam in a big school.There are 2432 studens in my school,54 classes and 149 teachers in it.There are forty--three students in my class.There are very friendly.Our classroom is big and bright.I like chinese very much.I study chinese very well.I study English very well,too.Our class is from half past seven a.m.to five o'clock p.m.My school is beautiful
英语作文改错,
Dear Joe Fread:
How are you?Thank you to me.I know a lot of you and I tell you something about me.Iam in a big school.There are 2432 studens in my school,54 classes and 149 teachers in it.There are forty--three students in my class.There are very friendly.Our classroom is big and bright.I like chinese very much.I study chinese very well.I study English very well,too.Our class is from half past seven a.m.to five o'clock p.m.My school is beautiful I like my school.Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Hunt
Thank you to me应改为thank you for writing to me
I know a lot of you and I tell you something about me应改为I know a lot about you and I will tell you someting about me
There are 2432 studens in my school,54 classes and 149 teachers in it应改为There are 2432 studens,54 classes and 149 teachers in my school
There are very friendly应改为They are very friendly
I study chinese very well应该为I am good at Chinese或I do well in Chinese
I study English very well同上
Our class is from half past seven a.m.to five o'clock p.m应改为Our classes begin from half past seven a.m.to five o`clock p.m.
Yours,
Hunt应放在末尾
所以应该是
Dear Joe Fread:
How are you?Thank you for writing to me .I know a lot about you and I will tell you someting about me . Iam in a big school.There are 2432 studens,54 classes and 149 teachers in my school .There are forty--three students in my class.They are very friendly.Our classroom is big and bright. I like chinese very much.I am good at Chinese.I am good at Engish,too.Our classes begin from half past seven a.m.to five o`clock p.m. .My school is beautiful I like my school.Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Hunt（最后这个打不出来）
Thank you to me改成Thank you to tell me about yourself.
There are very friendly
There应是They
I like chinese very much.I study chinese very well.
chinese应是Chinese
Our class is from half past seven a.m.to five o'clock p.m"改成Our class starts at half past seven a.m and stops at five o'clock p.m
Yours,
Hunt应放在末尾
"Thank you to me"改成Thank you for sth
"know a lot of you" 改成know a lot about you
"There are very friendly"改成ther are very friendly
"Our class is from half past seven a.m.to five o'clock p.m"改成Our class begins at half past seven a.m and stops at five o'clock p.m比较好
"Please write to me soon"提段好些