英语改错,(是我自已译的CN2的课文)大家帮我看看哪里错了!As we had had a long walk through a market of the Old Delhi.we stopped to have a rest at a square.After a while,we noticed there was a snake-charmer with two large baskets over there,so we went to have a look at him.As soon as he saw us ,he pick up a long pipe inlayed coins and opened one of the baskets.When he began to play a tune,we first saw the snake which rose out of the basket and followed the pipe to move.When snak

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英语改错,(是我自已译的CN2的课文)
大家帮我看看哪里错了!
As we had had a long walk through a market of the Old Delhi.we stopped to have a rest at a square.After a while,we noticed there was a snake-charmer with two large baskets over there,so we went to have a look at him.As soon as he saw us ,he pick up a long pipe inlayed coins and opened one of the baskets.When he began to play a tune,we first saw the snake which rose out of the basket and followed the pipe to move.When snake -charmer suddenly played jazz and pop musics,we were very surpirsed that the nake still moved slowly.It is obvious that the nake couldn't tell the difference betwen Indian music and jazz.

你翻译的很好 不需要修改