这个句子正确么?once...Once setting a goal,she will try her best to achieve it.我不想说once she set a goal,she will try her best to achieve it.觉得有点罗嗦.那么第一句话正确么?请给出负责任的回答.

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这个句子正确么?once...
Once setting a goal,she will try her best to achieve it.
我不想说once she set a goal,she will try her best to achieve it.觉得有点罗嗦.那么第一句话正确么?请给出负责任的回答.

完全正确。楼主的语感还是不错的。

Once setting a goal, she tries her best to achieve, "it"不需要

最好是 once having set a goal 因为是先定好了目标,才能努力

可以的,主动的就应该用动名词。

四楼的什么it不要啊?那she tries to achieve什么啊?
参考一下2楼
Once having the goal set