英语作文桂林是一篇游记!

　　多少字的?
　　We're going to China's guangxi guilin middle school,there are ten boys eight girl and two teachers to,we in the morning,afternoon YouGuiLin language,guilin landscape really beautiful!In the evening we free activities,meet cool,we fixed,best staying with a family,convenient to learn English translation,conduce to the English improved.Early send invitation,convenient do concerned formalities 这样够吗?
　　翻译：我们打算去中国广西桂林中学,共有十个男生八个女孩及两个老师去,我们上午上语文,下午游桂林,桂林的山水真的好漂亮啊!晚上我们*活动,迎着凉风,我们席地而坐,最好住在当地人家里,方便学英译,有助于英语提高.尽早寄邀请函,方便办有关手续 .
　　My wonderful experience in Guilin
　　Today was fine and cloudy,and the sky looked blue.I went to visit Guilin with my grandfather.We spent 2 hours taking a bus to Guilin.
　　When we got there,we went to Seven Stars Park first,which is beautiful and famous.There are many kinds of colourful flowers.They are all lovely and beautiful.We took many photos there.
　　After a while,we went to the zoo in the park.There are also many animals in the zoo.I like birds best,because they have beautiful feather and can sing many good songs.We watched them gladly and feed something to them.
　　After that,we went to the Li River.There are many famous places and bridges beside and on the river.We met many foreigners.The river water was very clean and the hills were green.It looks like a wonderful picture.We stayed beside the Li River for a long time,feeling very happy.
　　When we felt tired,we took the bus back home.What a wonderful time We had!
　　翻译：我在桂林美妙的经历
　　今天一直很好,多云,天空是蓝色的.我去访问桂林和我的祖父.我们花了2个小时乘公共汽车去桂林.
　　我们到那里时,我们先去了七星公园,这是一个美丽而闻名的公园.有许多种色彩鲜艳的花朵.它们都很美丽.我们拍了许多照片.
　　过了一会儿,我们去了的动物园.也有许多动物在动物园里.我最喜欢鸟,因为他们有漂亮的羽毛,会唱许多美好的歌曲.我们很开心看到它们和喂东西给它们.
　　在那之后,我们去了美丽的漓江.有许多著名的地方——桥梁和周围的河.我们遇到了许多外国人.河水很干净、小山都是绿色的.它看起来像一个精彩的图片.我们在漓江周围呆了很久,感到很高兴.
　　当我们感觉到疲倦的时候,我们坐公共汽车回家.这是一个多么美妙的时光!