这是病句的话 怎样改正呢.Dear have you ever heard about miss you so much The all lifetime just love可是有人说这是病句 希望修改过后告诉我原本应该的意思

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这是病句的话 怎样改正呢.
Dear have you ever heard about miss you so much The all lifetime just love
可是有人说这是病句 希望修改过后告诉我原本应该的意思

ever 是曾经的意思,还是去掉比较好.
My dear,have you heard that I miss you so much? All my lifetime is just for loving you!
亲爱的,你听到我对你深深的思念了吗?我的一生都只为了爱你.