请英语高手帮我看看这篇英语作文的语法(急!）Hi,I'm Wu.Mybirthday is in the November 10,so I'm a scorpio,12 years old.I'm from Leshan.I like the violin,but I can't playing it.I can playing the piano.I like ACG and pop music too.My idol is vocaloid family.My favorite dessert is buliou and mousse,favorite fruit is oranges and bananas,favorite beverage is milk tae.I rest time drawing the pictures and singing the song.It's me.怕没人理我,所以回答完再给分……My birthday 忘了打空格。

Hi,I'm Wu. My birthday is in November the 10th ,so I'm a scorpio,12 years old. I'm from Leshan.
I like the violin, but I can't play it. I can play the piano. I like ACG and pop music, too.My idol is Vocaloid.
My favorite dessert is buliou(不知道是什么甜点) and mousse（也不知道。但应该都开头字母大写）My favorite(最喜欢，通常是一个) fruit is orange.And my favorite beverage is milk tea. In my spare time(业余时间) ，I draw pictures and sing the song.
It's me.

Hi,I'm Wu. I'm 12 years old.My birthday is on November 10.I'm from Leshan.
I like the violin, but I can't playing it.I can playing the piano.I like ACG and pop music too.My idol is vocaloid family.
My favorite desserts are buliou and mousse.My favorite fruits are oranges and bananas.My favorite beverage is milk tea.
In my spare time,I often draw pictures and sing songs.
That's me.

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