高一英语改错题求助one cold winter day in 1900,a small boy was called Charles Chaplin was walked along the strrrt in London.He doesn'thave breakfast or lunch.He wanted to buy some bread ,and he did't have any money .His father died since he was very young.His mother was often very sick,so she could take care of Charles or his brother Neither of them had to work to help his mother.He was very young but his dream was very big.He wanted to be great man in the wo
高一英语改错题求助
one cold winter day in 1900,a small boy was called Charles Chaplin was walked along the strrrt in London.He doesn'thave breakfast or lunch.He wanted to buy some bread ,and he did't have any money .His father died since he was very young.His mother was often very sick,so she could take care of Charles or his brother Neither of them had to work to help his mother.He was very young but his dream was very big.He wanted to be great man in the world of films.So he worked very hardly
one cold winter day in1 1900s,a small boy was called Charles Chaplin was 2walking along the strrrt in London.He 3didn'tt have breakfast or lunch.He wanted to buy some bread ,and he did't have 4some money .His father died 5when he was very young.His mother was often very sick,so she 6 couldn't take care of Charles 7and his brother 8both of them had to work to help 9their mother.He was very young but his dream was very big.He wanted to be great man in the world of films.So he worked very 10hard 1到10哦，自习看哦
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On one cold winter day in 1900,a small boy called Charles Chaplin was walked along the street in London.He didn' t have breakfast or lunch.He wanted to buy some bread ,but he didn't have any money .His father died when he was very young.His mother was often very sick,but she had to take care of Charles or his brother.Neither of them could work to help their mother.He was very young but his dream was very big.He wanted to be a great man in the world of films.So he worked very hard.