英语邮件 谁能帮我看看有没有错误Dear ,Good morning!I feel that there is much predestined relationship between us.You are just like the mother of my two kids in America.I am a manager in a fashion company.I will send you some beautiful clothes made by 100% cotton for your children sometime if you like.I have been very thankful for your good care for my children.You are always welcomed to contact me.Your Sincerely,
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英语邮件 谁能帮我看看有没有错误
Dear ,
Good morning!
I feel that there is much predestined relationship between us.You are just like the mother of my two kids in America.I am a manager in a fashion company.I will send you some beautiful clothes made by 100% cotton for your children sometime if you like.
I have been very thankful for your good care for my children.You are always welcomed to contact me.
Your Sincerely,
答
正文开头不是要空4个字母的位置
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我也觉得你的表达很流畅，不过我还是建议可以在much前面加个a，因为relationship是可数的。
至于thankful那句话我觉得你这么说也是可以的。
答
邮件基本没有错误,表达得很清晰.
唯一一处：I have been very thankful...不必用完成时,直接说 I'm very thankful...就可以了
另外,落款处应为 Yours Sincerely,
祝一切顺利!