麻烦你们帮我修改我造的英语句子..是写故事的.when everyone coming ang going that my shadow borne trample 人来人往我的影子总承受着被别人践踏/nobody found to that my shadow became incomplete by trample 没有人发现我被践踏得残缺的影子/i look up the incomplete shadow and little by little corrode my heart 我看着残缺的影子渐渐腐蚀我的心/i felt disappointed.suddenly,my mobile telephone made a sound.我很失落.突然,手机响了/the boss searching me .上司在找我./i made up the mobile telephone and said to him' i would be goes back very quickly' 我接了电

麻烦你们帮我修改我造的英语句子..是写故事的.
when everyone coming ang going that my shadow borne trample 人来人往我的影子总承受着被别人践踏/
nobody found to that my shadow became incomplete by trample 没有人发现我被践踏得残缺的影子/
i look up the incomplete shadow and little by little corrode my heart 我看着残缺的影子渐渐腐蚀我的心/
i felt disappointed.suddenly,my mobile telephone made a sound.我很失落.突然,手机响了/
the boss searching me .上司在找我./
i made up the mobile telephone and said to him' i would be goes back very quickly' 我接了电话跟他说‘我要上去了’/
them i hand up directly the mobile telephone .就直接挂了/