"Hoping to join this program also out of the consideration of my future career life."
问题描述：
"Hoping to join this program also out of the consideration of my future career life."
"He earned the scholarship through his hardworking and outstanding perfomance."
很中国式英语啊,能力有限,高人能否把它改得正宗一点啊.
答
第一句不错.
第二句：
through -> for
hardworking 是形容词,修饰 perfomance
改为 hard working 好点
outstanding 一般修饰 acchievements 好点,比较少见其修饰 perfomance