帮我看看这篇文章,英语的文章I am a sanguine,cautious,enthusiastic ,wise and knowledgable girl ,she who treats people with hospitality and kindness,I am responsible ,positive and would love to meet any challenges in any time!I am the kind of person who do things step by step ,full of passion and diligence,good skills in appliance ,I love communicate with people and that is why everybody likes me.I will obey the law of the country ,the rules of the company and the so

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帮我看看这篇文章,英语的文章
I am a sanguine,cautious,enthusiastic ,wise and knowledgable girl ,she who treats people with hospitality and kindness,I am responsible ,positive and would love to meet any challenges in any time!
I am the kind of person who do things step by step ,full of passion and diligence,good skills in appliance ,I love communicate with people and that is why everybody likes me.
I will obey the law of the country ,the rules of the company and the social routine.
I am a qualified talent with basic quality and ability,I will win respect doublelessly if you can give an offer
帮我看看有没有什么语法问题,或者通顺上的~不用翻译中文……

我是个自信,谨慎,热情,博学多才的女孩,待人热心亲切,有责任感,积极向上,随时等待新的挑战!
我是一个做事按步就班的人,满富激情,勤奋努力,操作闲熟,我喜欢与人交流,因此大家都挺喜欢我。
我会尊从国家的法律法规以及公司和社会准则的规定。
我会充份发挥自己的才能,只要您给我提供机会我会给你双倍的惊喜。

第一行 she 去掉
第二行 meet 最好换成 face
第三行 challenges变成challenge 而且 in去掉
第四行 貌似应该passion,diligence and good skills...
第五行 I love to communicate..