the advantage of the internet

the advantage of the internet
the advantages of the internet
We know the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.
On the Internet,we can get as much information as we can.We can send e-mails to our friends and talk to them as well.students are able to get the latest information from literature to sports.Students can also join the group on line,discuss such things as maths problems,school life and so on.Through the Internet students can broaden their view
Besides,on the Internet we can read books,enjoy music and watch ball games.
We can also do shopping without leaving our homes.
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