帮我找找有多少错好不好.Last week,the weather was beautiful,Tom went to the park with his family.They were very happy,and took many photos.Later on Tom saw a blind women.Tom came up to him,then helped him with stick.At last,they took a photo together.If everyone has a loving heart,the world will become better and better.
问题描述：
帮我找找有多少错好不好.
Last week,the weather was beautiful,Tom went to the park with his family.They were very happy,and took many photos.Later on Tom saw a blind women.Tom came up to him,then helped him with stick.At last,they took a photo together.If everyone has a loving heart,the world will become better and better.
答
首先,形容weather不用beautiful.你可以形容一下天气It is a really nice day full of sunshine.作文中多用复合句型提升档次.woman是单数,不用复数形式.helped her.女士的宾格形式是her.with a stick,要有介词.