请高手帮忙修改英语作文,急!A letter to my parentsDear Mom and Dad,Thank you so much for bringing me up.I know how hard you’ve worked during the past years to make my life better. I can remember how many times you help me when I was in trouble. Every time, when I saw the tears and exhaustion on your face, I was moving because you’ve did so much for me in this 15 years. You become old person and I become a great girl. When I was a kid, I didn’t understand the love t
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A letter to my parents
Dear Mom and Dad,
Thank you so much for bringing me up.I know how hard you’ve worked during the past years to make my life better. I can remember how many times you help me when I was in trouble. Every time, when I saw the tears and exhaustion on your face, I was moving because you’ve did so much for me in this 15 years. You become old person and I become a great girl.
When I was a kid, I didn’t understand the love that you gave me. But I know today. Now I’m standing here express my thanks to you-----my dear parents, I promise you that I will be a good person in the future, please believe me.
Yours,
Shelly
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I was moving because you’ve did so much for me in this 15 years。 It was moving
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But I know today。I know it.
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Dear Mom 中的Mum写错了;you help me when I was in trouble.前后时态不一
I was moving because you’ve did so much for me in this 15 years。 It was moving
You become old person and I become a great girl. 加an and改成while
But I know today。I know it.
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you help me when I was in trouble.前后时态不一
I was moving because you’ve did so much for me in this 15 years.It was moving
You become old person and I become a great girl.加an and改成while
But I know today.I know it.
Now I’m standing here express my .to express