语法有没有错The book describes an adventurous story among a group of children who can communicate with others viatelepathy.

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语法有没有错
The book describes an adventurous story among a group of children who can communicate with others viatelepathy.

这本书描述的是一群孩子其中一个能通过心灵感觉交流爱冒险的一个故事。among是指其中一个,感觉应该用of.

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The book 主语
describes 谓语
an adventurous story宾语
among a group of children 定语 修饰 story
who can communicate with others viatelepathy.定语从句修饰children