帮忙看看这段英文有错的么Hello,everybody!My name is ××× and my English name is ×××.I'm in Class 1,Grade 1.I like listening to some English songs.My favourite song is WestLife's 《You Raise Me Up》.Thank you!
帮忙看看这段英文有错的么
Hello,everybody!My name is ××× and my English name is ×××.I'm in Class 1,Grade 1.I like listening to some English songs.My favourite song is WestLife's 《You Raise Me Up》.
Thank you!
no any mistake!
语法上没有任何问题,都很正确,严谨.
只是句式简单了些,不过如果是初学英语的话,也就应该是这样.
没错~
like的用法啊
主谓一致
单复时态都没有问题
没有错误一点错误都没有 谁说把listen to 的to你学过英语没 固定搭配 你去掉试试看 你考大学 考英语的时候用用看 能行不 人家没有错误
语法上没错。I like listening to some English songs。把这句的some 去掉更好
可以考虑WestLife's 《You Raise Me Up》.改为《You Raise Me Up》from WestLife 更为明了
listening to some English
的to 去掉?
感觉有点不顺口..?
不去也行..
my favorite song is You Raise Me up of Westlife's 更好
另外ENGLISH SONGS 前面就不要加SOME了,比较奇怪,喜欢听就是喜欢,喜欢听一些就是废话
No misakes.
Maybe you can change some of your sentences.(I mean the structure.) That will make you aticle wonderful.
Very good
可以 没有语法错误 都是简单英语