请问下这句话语法有错么In spite of her watering every day,Susan's flowers are withered.

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请问下这句话语法有错么
In spite of her watering every day,Susan's flowers are withered.

你好。更简单有效的表达是:
Though watered every day, Susan's flowers withered / are withering. .
------ 用过去分词结构做让步状语成分。wither在这里是不及物动词,没有被动语态形式。

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语法上严格来说是错误的,因为主句的主语是Susan's flowers,和让步介词短语中的动词water构成被动关系.应改为:In spite of being watered every day,Susan's flowers are withered.或者In spite of their being wate...