请帮忙找出这篇英语文章的语法错误``一共10处The earth,our home,is very importanceto all of us.Everybody can live without her.And I love her very much.I shall to care for her.We'd better plant more trees or flowers to make the earth much beautiful.If we study hard,wu can learn many knowledge on the earth and we can care for her more better.I hope the eateh will be a large family.There is not war,only friendship and happyness.各位能人异士帮帮忙`````

The earth, our home, is very important to all of us. Everybody can't live without her.And I love her very much. I shall take care for her.We'd better plant more trees or flowers to make the earth more beautiful.If we study hard,we can learn much knowledge on the earth and we can take

The earth, our home, is very important(1) to all of us. Everybody can't(2) live without her.
And I love her very much. I shall(3) care for her.We'd better plant more trees and (4)flowers to make the earth more(5) beautiful.
If we study hard, wu can learn much(6)knowledge on the earth and we can care for her better(7). I hope the earth (8)will be a large family. There is no (9)war, only friendship and happiness(10).

The earth, our home, is very (important) to all of us.（Nobody）can live without her.
And I love her very much. I (shall) care for her.We'd better plant more trees （and） flowers to make the earth (more) beautiful.
If we study hard, we can learn (much) knowledge（about）the earth and we can care for her (more:去掉more或改成much）better. I hope the （earth） will be a large family. There is （no） war, only friendship and happyness（happiness）.

importance ---important
can---can't
shall---have
for---of
much beautiful中间加一个more
many---much
for----of
more---much
be---become
not---no
happyness---happiness

The earth, our home, is very importance (important )to all of us. Everybody can(can't) live without her.
And I love her very much. I shall to(to 去掉)+ （take） care for her.We'd better plant more trees or flowers to make the earth much（more） beautiful.
If we study hard, wu（we） can learn many（much） knowledge on the earth and we can +(take) care for her more(much) better. I hope the eateh(earth) will be a large family. There is not war, only (but)friendship and happyness(happiness).

The earth, which is our home, is very importanceto all of us. nobody can live without her.
And I love her very much. I should to care for her.We'd better to plant more trees or flowers to make the earth much beautiful.
If we study hard, we can learn more knowledge of the earth and we can care for her much better. I hope that the eateh will be a large family. There is no war, only friendship and happyness.

importance应改为important
Everybody应改为Nobody
shall to 应改为shall
much beautiful中much应改为more
many knowledge中many 应去掉
on the earth 中on改为about
more better中more应去掉
will be中will应去掉
not war中not改为no
only 改为 but

importance----important.形容词名词错用 can----can't意思相反 或者把everybody改成nobodyto----去掉 情态动词后直接接实意动词 or---and 是 '和'不是'或者'.much---后面加more 或者直接把much变成more 让地球变的...

第一行:importance改为important,can后加not
第二行：shall后的to去掉，I改为we,or改为and
第三行：much改为more
第四行：many改为much,more改为much
第五行：not改为no
一般改错就九个的阿

这个是你自己写的东西吗?
怎么老是感觉好象是中国式英语哦
有几处我觉得是错的
importance--impotant(very后面应该是形容词,而不是名词)
can--can't(without已经是否定了,所以前面也应该是否定,翻译出来是离开了地球我就不能生活)
shall to care--shall care(shall+动词原形)
much beautiful--much more beautiful(much 后面是是加比较级的)
many knoweldge--much knowledge(知识是不可数名词,不能用many形容)
I hope the eateh will be a large family.这句是病句,与现实不符,地球上的人本来就是一家人哈
从字面上看，我就看出这些点毛病.恕本人眼拙未能看出所有的错误.