请帮我看看这封英文咨询信是否有错?To Whom It May Concern:This is a consultion letter from China.I am a Chinese student , who graduated from Suzhou High School of Jiangsu Province in September in 2010.Your school's acadamic reputation attracting me,I sincerely hope to attend your school to study further.But some momentous questions as follow are puzzling me.1.As a high school graduates,which certificates of English level do your school admit,ITELS or TOEFL? In addition

请帮我看看这封英文咨询信是否有错?
To Whom It May Concern:
This is a consultion letter from China.I am a Chinese student , who graduated from Suzhou High School of Jiangsu Province in September in 2010.Your school's acadamic reputation attracting me,I sincerely hope to attend your school to study further.But some momentous questions as follow are puzzling me.
1.As a high school graduates,which certificates of English level do your school admit,ITELS or TOEFL? In addition,is it neccessary for foreign students to Swedish?
2.Besides certificates of language,what certifying docume must be submitted?
3.What scholarship do your school establish?
Thank you for your time.I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
best regards
EmersonChow