英语短文改错 学的好的达人 一共10处 请一一指出啊
英语短文改错 学的好的达人 一共10处 请一一指出啊
dear Jane
how time flies.I've gone here for half a year.there has so much to
do in college,so there is very little times for sleep.Myparents always
remind me that it is important to take an advantage of all that is available
in college.But it's equal important to take care of my own healthy.
For this reason,I've started going to the gym more often.I sometime go to the
movies to have fun.There is no room for boredom here;I just wish Ihave
more hours a day.As you can tell.I'll very happy.Thanks asking!
I hope you are happy,either!
dear Jane
how time flies.I've （gone）(been) here for half a year.there (has) (is) so much to
do in college,so there is very little (times) (time) for (sleep) (sleeping).My parents always
remind me that it is important to take an advantage of all that is available
in college.But it's equal important to take care of my own (healthy) (health).
For this reason,I've started going to the gym more often.I (sometime) (sometimes) go to the
movies to have fun.There is no room for boredom here;I just wish I (have) (had)
more hours a day.As you can tell.I'll (be) very happy.Thanks (for) asking!
I hope you are happy,(either) (too)!