英语短文改错,改十处,I'm now on holiday at the Coastal Hotel ,which is a nice hotel by the seaside.On the yard there's a big swimming pools.From the hotel windows you can see the sea.The Coastal Hotel offered good food and owns a nice bar,either.The employees here are friendly and helpful.The holiday offers various activities,which i think is the more satisfactory hotel.This is what i did:i went sailing in the sea on Monday.And on the Monday evening i saw a new

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I'm now on holiday at the Coastal Hotel ,which is a nice hotel by the seaside.On the yard there's a big swimming pools.From the hotel windows you can see the sea.The Coastal Hotel offered good food and owns a nice bar,either.The employees here are friendly and helpful.The holiday offers various activities,which i think is the more satisfactory hotel.This is what i did:i went sailing in the sea on Monday.And on the Monday evening i saw a new film Rio.On Tuesday i had a coach trip an old town,which is a popular place of interest and in the evening i went to a disco party,when i relaxed myself quite well.It's the most enjoyable holiday i have never had.I like it here very much that i've already decided that i must come again next year.