帮忙看看我的英语作文有没有问题This is one of Mondrian's works and it also a representative work of the abstract painting style.We can appreciate his painting from the perspective of painting philosophy.

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帮忙看看我的英语作文有没有问题
This is one of Mondrian's works and it also a representative work of the abstract painting style.We can appreciate his painting from the perspective of painting philosophy.

This is one of Mondrian's works and it also is a representative work of the abstract painting style.We can appreciate his painting from the perspective of painting philosophy.

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很好很好,没有问题.