大家帮我看看这句英语对吗?With the rapid development of living standard great changes have taken place in shopping style taht more and more people trend to go shopping online .The phenomenon has aroused public concern.

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大家帮我看看这句英语对吗?
With the rapid development of living standard great changes have taken place in shopping style taht more and more people trend to go shopping online .The phenomenon has aroused public concern.

With the rapid development of living standard, great changes have taken place in shopping style that more and more people trend to go shopping online .The phenomenon has aroused public concern. 完全正确,不过你that 拼错了

迅速发展的生活标准已经发生了巨大的变化公正的购物方式,越来越多的人在网上购物,趋势走现象引起了公众的广泛关注。
The rapid development of standard life great changes have taken place in the justice shopping way, more and more people in the online shopping, a trend to go phenomenon brought to public attention.

Trend一般用于名词,这里你用try就可以吧,还有这种现象是受到关注,所以感觉最后一句应该是被动语态.
PS:个人看法,不对的话请多多包涵.