五年级英语自我介绍,60个单词左右Hello everyone!My name is Zhangqian.I am this year eleven years old .I come from taizhou siom elementary school. I'm is a very lovely and clever girl. I love English、drawing pictures and music because. I'm good at these. After listening to my introduction. Willing to make you my friend?这样写,怎么样?谁能帮我修改修改?

写的不错了，总之比我好
Hello everybody !My name is xx.I'm a clever (boy or girl).I study in
Class1 Grade5.I'm lovely and very funny!I like English very much!My favourite animal is dog.And I'm good at drawing,swamming and writing.
What about you?

总体来说写的不错,参考参考我写的吧!（我认为我写的还可以~）P.S.你最好稍微的修改修改.我的语法不太好.Hello everybody!I want to make friends with you.Now,let me first introduce myself.My name is XX and i I...