能不能帮忙看看有无语法错误?Perfect life with Intelligent Remote transfer doorbell,you can have,I can have.若有错 可否帮忙修改 质量高者 赠100分
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能不能帮忙看看有无语法错误?
Perfect life with Intelligent Remote transfer doorbell,you can have,I can have.
若有错 可否帮忙修改 质量高者 赠100分
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三个分句之间缺少连词,不能构成一句句子.Perfect life in the future, with intelligent Remote transfer doorbell,is available to both you and me.这样可能会好一点.
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你把你想表达的中文也写上再说.
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肯定有错误,
Perfect life with Intelligent Remote transfer doorbell---you can have it.so can i .你能拥有,我也可以
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完善的生活智慧,可以有远距离转移门铃,
Perfect life with Intelligent Remote transfer doorbell，you can have